
In my experience, we are missing the part on ‘relatability’. If it is not something that a reader can believe in or relate to, then no matter how funny the gag is, it is going to set the cartoon back by a few miles.
The piece above is an example of how a concept raises more questions than it answers. Why is there a big tea bag at the pool railing? Who left it there? Why is it there? The original intent was to make a play on the similarity between the pool handles to that of the handles found on tea cups which are also typically where people would wrap the strings of a tea bag around. The idea was lost eventually amongst the heaps of other questions forming in the reader’s mind. In the end, it became nothing more than just a funny visual.
I think that’s what sets great cartoons from the normal ones. Master cartoonists takes the responsibility of creating cartoons that are imaginative but yet at the same time not pushing them over the boundaries of believability and into the realm of absurdity. Ideas without a certain element of logic are just wilful drawings in some sense. To draw a cartoon on music, you must research on how musical notes look like.
Cartooning is sometimes like a conversation. It has to go two ways, back and forth between the cartoonists and the reader. For readers to enjoy your art, they have to first accept it. And to accept it, it must be somewhat familiar or relatable to them. And we rely on that familiarity to eventually bring a wonderful story experience to them.
Have a think about whether if there is an element of believability in your next cartoon. It might bring it from good to great.
JunMing